This goes out for all the ppl. living their lives in the fast lane!...ppl. who have a lot of work to do n' a little time to think...n' not necessary getting the desired outcome of their work...
Take a few seconds to think!...At the end of it all...does it really matter?!!!...
I really don't mean to sound pessimistic...but at the end of a really busy day...when I look back at what I've done...after a very productive day...i stop to think what's next?!...cus no matter how good I am...there's always gonna be someone better!...n' no matter how far I get in this life...there's always gonna be something better!...so when can I say that am happily content with where I stand in this life?!... am not a perfectionist...but what if the answer is NEVER?!...
Take a few seconds to think!...At the end of it all...does it really matter?!!!...
I really don't mean to sound pessimistic...but at the end of a really busy day...when I look back at what I've done...after a very productive day...i stop to think what's next?!...cus no matter how good I am...there's always gonna be someone better!...n' no matter how far I get in this life...there's always gonna be something better!...so when can I say that am happily content with where I stand in this life?!... am not a perfectionist...but what if the answer is NEVER?!...
VISION
Close the door & turn out the lights
I had a vision I died tonight
Lying breathless on the floor
Nothing to ask or wish for
I'm glad that this sick life is over
No more cold nights...it's all over
For the last time people came to see my face
Before they bury me in a few meters of space
...
No where to go no where to hide
My soul was running from side to side
Thank u God I loved u'r gift
Cus death is the best thing I can get
…
Knocking on heaven's door with a smile
If I can get in if only for a while
All the pain will be forgotten
Who want to live when we got heaven?!
Close the door & turn out the lights
I had a vision I died tonight
Lying breathless on the floor
Nothing to ask or wish for
I'm glad that this sick life is over
No more cold nights...it's all over
For the last time people came to see my face
Before they bury me in a few meters of space
...
No where to go no where to hide
My soul was running from side to side
Thank u God I loved u'r gift
Cus death is the best thing I can get
…
Knocking on heaven's door with a smile
If I can get in if only for a while
All the pain will be forgotten
Who want to live when we got heaven?!
P.S. I wrote this poem way before on a really bad day…cus usually am not that dark n' creepy :)…CHEERS!…
12 comments:
The "someone" and the "something" better are the driving force for us to keep going! The moment we get the feeling that we are the best or we are at the top of whatever thing! It's the end and your poem aplies! You may say that nobody gets there, well, I would disagree, cuz dead people are there, breathing dead people!
Sharks my dear .. I asked that question like hundreds and hundreds of times..sometimes I got the "never" answer . sometimes I got the "maybe tomorrow" answer , and sometimes I got the "I feel good about myself now" answer . but still I didn't stop asking it over and over . I don't know if I made my point clear like I have it in my head but atleast I tried :)
I love that poem . I still have it from the time you made me read it..
i'm always with the 'never' answer
very nicley written, u remind me of something i wrote like 2 years agi too..
thanks for sharing this with us
Hi all,
can somebody help me with a problem on my blog? My sidebar is pushed all the way to the end and it looks weired. Anybody here has an idea how to fix it? All I know about computers is typing and browsing...
thank you!
Really nice and sensetive words, inshallah u go to heaven but after 3mer taweel:) cheers
I like the poem very sensitive indeed, anyway there is always someone who'll be better than you, and there will be always something better for you, I guess the key is to create balance between being happy with what you have and what you are, and your continuous ambition to be better... I guess!!
Hey Girlie .... it seems like you are in the same whirligig that i'm trapped in ... strange I didnt meet you there :S
anyways.... You have to work your ass off towards some important target that wll make sense in your life .. no matter if we never reach there.. but at least we'll know we've tried... and you know what I think about your poems :D
Thank u all guys for ur comments...it really meant a lot to me.
Ihsan: i think it's all about always wanting more n' looking for some kind of peace of mind at the same time...well at least "the breathing dead" got their peace of mind!...
Cutie: dear u summed it all...once u reach the "I feel good about myself now" answer u'r gonna wake up after 2 days n' ask the same question n' get the "never" answer...u think about it for another 2 days n' reach out the "maybe tomorrow" answer...and SO ON!...See what i mean?!...am glad u still have the poem but those was some really bad days for me...
No one: thx a lot...u really sound like a restless girl from the very beginning...n' am not saying it's a bad thing...bless u girl...
Ghalia: thx for the complement!..."sensitive" now that's a word i don't get hear that often neither about me or my words :)...try the word "m3etteh" :D...hope we all go to heaven...AMEAN!...
Sinan: i guess u guessed right!...talk about KEYS!...when u find it save me a copy :p...n' yay the S word again...thx!...
Gray fox: ABSAAR! where were u looking so that u missed me there ;p...well this is starting to turn into nagging but my argument is what if i found myself a target n' worked my poor ass for it...n' finally after i got there n' felt the rush for 2 days or lets say a week a month!...when the sweetness of being content is gone!...it's a loop...well never mind...i don't remember what u think about my poems...i think they r over rhymed!...but never mind that too...i really like u'r poems much more...
Well my friends i say that this particular subject can be seen from many angles n' all of them maybe true...but here's a "Hadeath Qudsi" حديث قدسي i found just the other day...i tried to translate it but some how it didn't sounds right!...my only impression when i read it was WOW!...
"
ياابن آدم لاتخف من ذي سلطان مادام سلطاني و ملكي لايزول، لاتخف من فوات الرزق مادامت خزائني مملوؤة لا تنفذ.خلقت الأشياء كلها من اجلك و خلقتك من اجلي فسر في طاعتي يطعك كل شيئ .لي عليك فريضة ولك علي رزق فإن خالفتني في فريضتي لم اخالفك في رزقك، وان رضيت بما قسمته لك ارض قلبك، وان لم ترض بما قسمته لك فعزتي و جلالي لأسلطن عليك الدنيا تركض منها كركض الوحوش في البرية ولا ينالك منها الا ما قسمته لك وكنت عندي مذموماً "
Hey you, thanks for adding links to my blogs :)
It's so sweet of you
Welcome Tarek...but I really like u'r blog...i think it's useful....
wallahi big WOW ya sharks
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